Chapter 6 - Fun at the bank! Author BebopJet. Comments You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment darkrage6 on August 23, , AM darkrage6 on August 23, , AM Chapter: index. Any chance of finishing this story at all? Is there any hope that this story will continue? There's always hope ; I still monitor this site in case people have questions. Long story short, I had 2 kids and got a few big promotions, and my free time to write has dropped to just about nothing.
I want to continue, but it's a matter of finding free time at this point. Congratulations on your expanded family and promotion! Glad life is working out for you.
I, too, look forward to seeing where this is headed and return to it regularly, but not at the cost of what's important to you. Just whenever you get the time. Keep up the excellent work! It's nice to see that you didn't forget about all your horny fans :D. Just brilliant story, hope it will be continued somedays :. Love this story can't wait for next chapter. How's the next chapter coming along? Amazing story so far I really can't wait to see what happens next. As requested I'm posted what I have done thus far on Chapter 9. It's still fairly rough and I'm having a little writer's block on where to go next.
I have the "broad strokes" in mind, but I'm having trouble filling out the minutia. Suggestions are welcome of course, just keep in mind that I'm not dropping the antagonist part of the story line.
Some people have expressed frustration or dissatisfaction with the concept of there being a conflict in the story and just wanted it to be some fluff stroke material. I'm not opposed to stroke material at all, it's why I write this stuff, but I believe a central part of any good story should be some level of conflict to over come, and I wanted to give the "Sex Genie" story a little bit of a twist, expanding on the supernatural elements established in the core material that Joe Brolly invented.
Looks pretty good, i've got an idea for the antagonist- Maybe she forces Vicky into a situation where she has to make a choice between Jessie and Lisa. That's an idea I've been playing with. I know I wanted there to be a bit of a struggle between the love triangle between Lisa, Vicky, and Jessie where Lisa felt like she was being left out or behind and that led to her fall to the "Dark Side.
Basically Cassandra wants Jessie and Lisa wants Vicky, and this has led to the dark partnership between the older woman and the spunky girl. Ah OK, that sounds very interesting indeed. It would be interesting for Cassandra to be more complex and not your typical one-dimensional villain, maybe she grows to genuinely love Jessie, and Jessie finds herself conflicted on wanting to please her master and being seduced by Cassandra.
Cassandra isn't an evil woman or anything, just a woman out of time and frustrated by magic she doesn't understand. Whenever I create a new character I tend to base them off of pornstars Since it's easy to watch porn and see what that person looks like when they fuck. Vicky: Lily Cade Because I wanted her to be based on a proper lesbian. Ah Ok then, looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Sorry, getting my own characters confused. Cassandra is the driver Who I based off of Ava Adams. Katherine is the one based off of Lisa Ann and she's the antagonist. Yeah Katherine was who I meant. Shorter than your other chapters, but yeah, if you have a writers block it's better to get something out than to let it lay there.
So I know people have been clamoring for the next chapter, and I honestly kind of pick at it from time to time,but it's still not ready. Would people like me to post it "as-is" for right now knowing that it's still a work in progress and not yet finished. I know it's been like a year since I've updated, but it's still my intention to eventually finish this story sometime. I'm totally fine with that, i'm mostly curious as to what's going to happen with Lisa.
I hope you continue this! Looking forward to chapter 9 and I am excited for this story as much as the sex scene's. And this mysterious person who is wooing some of the love interests. I'm worried about this story because it is my favorite ongoing story.
Your tumblr is gone and no new chapters or comic have come up recently. If you are taking a break, I think you should let others continue the story. Oh shit, it's a vampire! Sorry for the late reply on this. Long story short is yes, I'm working on another chapter, but real life stuff is delaying the project.
Just work and family stuff, nothing tragic or dramatic. I hope to get it done as soon as possible. Love the latest chapter. The Star Trek fantasy was fantastic. Can't wait to read more! Getting murky here, keeping me in supense. Nice job. About 8k words into Chapter 8. It's shaping up to probably be the longest chapter yet in the series. Hmm, either one of 3 things So yeah, just take it with you when you leave tonight, no one will ever know.
It seems said Woman also likes the vices of the flesh, and might have Katherine under her sway. Wow, wasn't expecting anyone to think that hard about it :P. Uh oh. Um, Huston, we have a problem. Gratuitous sex, plot, conflict, excitement, which leads to more gratuitous sex. Need I say more? Keep up the good work. Chapter 7 is live! Big thanks to Superguest for his help! Very nice, I hope you keep working on this :. I'm actually working on Chapter 7 currently. Had some real life stuff come up but it's settled down now and I'm resuming work on the story.
Need the next chaper soon! I can't wait! Chapter 7 is effectively done. Superguest is going to take a final look at it from an editing perspective. It'll be posted soon. Got a tumblr site now that I'm going to start posting all the pictures I've commission of Vicky and Jessie. Still trying to get it configured properly, need to figure out how to put up linkes to my Hentai Foundry and Literotica pages. Glad to have one of my favorite stories here update.
Plot's moving right along, and spreading happiness in it's wake, makes me wonder what type of conflict they're going to eventualy run into. So I've seen a few people mention a conflict of some sort coming down the pipeline. I had intended to write something of that nature, but when I expressed those intentions I got some community feedback at literotica that they felt that would ruin the story. I'll open this conversation back up to the community, would people like to see some kind of conflict introduced into the story or just have Vicky explore her powers and sexual desires without all the drama?
While reading about Vicky exploring her powers and desires would be fun, it would eventually get boring. If it's up for discussion, my vote is for a conflict to be introduced. It adds a new twist, keeps things fresh, keeps the audience entertained. Adding a conflict turns this story from strait porn, to erotic fiction. Plot makes or breaks a story, and while you're doing great now, there is no plot without conflict of some sort.
Doesn't have to be much, but it does need some. You have a great future as a writer. Looking forward to more of this story. Need more pictures to go along with it. Chapter 6 is up!